Grayson was swimming fast underneath the water and Lynne was struggling to keep swimming. Then, to her amazement, Grayson leaped out of the water, soring six feet into the air. This gave Lynne a chance to catch up, because the whale needed to catch his breath after that. But, for the third time, Grayson disappeared. Lynne panicked, of course, and kept diving down for fifteen minutes. Since he was taking so long, Lynne started to swim back to shore, she was getting too cold and hypothermia was setting in. She struggled with leaving Grayson, and didn't want to give up on him, but she knew she would die out there if she didn't go home. Then finally Grayson appeared and Lynne became ecstatic. Out of no where, dolphins came swarming around them and played with them for a while. Lynne tells a story about how one time her friend and her were swimming in the ocean and two big dolphins were swimming right next to her friend and he didn't even realize it. After this story, which takes up 6 or so pages, Lynne finally touches Grayson for the first time. Both feeling rejuvenated, they head back to the pier.
I don't mean to be rude, because I know all literature is noteworthy and I probably could never write a book, but this is kind of boring to me. It was intense and interesting at first but after a while it just lags on and on. It has too many little details for me. The only reason I'm still reading is because I want to know how they find Grayson's mom.
Have a great night!
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